Jaded Eyes of a Prodigy – wickedlfairy17

March 22, 2009 at 1:01 pm (100.000 - 200.000 Words, Adoption, Harry's Childhood Before Hogwarts, Harry's Years of Hogwarts, Heir to Morgan Le Fey, Independent, Intelligent Protaginist, Manipulative Dumbledore, Mild Abuse, Muggle Hating, New Names, Other Schools, Payback to the Dursleys, Protagonist runs away, Using Magic at an early age)

Summary:
DarkHarry snapped early on, follow his journey for revenge. Surprises at every turn and not everything is as it appears. His search for power will reshape the world by fire and the magical world will never know what hit them.

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Review: This story is in my opinion one of the better “Harry goes to alternate school” stories. It has quite an original plot line and I think Dark & Smart!harry is rather done well by the author.

What I like: I like the invention of the alternate magical school. It is very well done and detailed. What I really found to be interesting is the test at the beginning of the year. It’s so descriptive that i can see it before me if I close my eyes

What I dislike: There are some plot directions I do not really like but that is a matter of personal taste. Overall there is nothing significant I dislike of this story

Rating: 8/10

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Harry Potter: A dark story – 01hari

March 21, 2009 at 8:51 pm (30.000 - 60.000 Words, Animagus, Harry's Years of Hogwarts, Intelligent Protaginist, Magical Trunk, Slytherin)

Summary:
Harry knows that he is a wizard at an early age. He practices magic while staying at Dursely’s. Powerful and unforgiving Harry Potter. Harry/Ginny pairing

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Review:
Although a bit rushed, this story is a fairly enjoyable time-waster if you don’t mind the lack of character development and spelling errors.

What I like: I really think Anti social, Friendless Harry is refreshing in contrast to all the stories in which he’s hanging around with ‘friends’ who are way below his level.

What I dislike: As I wrote, It’s rushed, a bit cliched, and a rather unoriginal plot. I don’t know if that’s because the author is from a non-English speaking country.

Rating: 6/10

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